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Marie Gail
Thank you Marie.
Great Dialogue! Jimmy Choo shoe? Doesn’t her mother know how much that costs? Plastic bag would work, but who is going to clean the shoe – hey I had 4 boys and 13 grandchildren – I’d be qualified to clean the shoe. Good Story! Nan 🙂
Thanks Nan.
It makes sense. That sheep dung must have been a mountain! Entertaining.
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too funny!!! great take:)
Thank you
Oh dear. The sheep were the catalyst for something already wrong between them, I guess! Well done, great dialogue!
Thanks Freya.
Oh dear. Hopefully they’re waiting a little bit down the road!
I doubt it.
A domestic! Those sheep have no respect for relationships. Clever.
Sheep never do.
He wouldn’t have left if he knew how much those Jimmy Choo’s cost. Good one!
It’s all about priorities. He knew how much his car cost and didn’t want poop on the upholstery.
Dear Victoria,
Very visual piece. The Johnny Choo shoe in poo is entertaining.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Victoria, Hilarious and well written. XD I could picture the whole scene. —Susan
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My mouth is open. He left?
He left. Absolutely left.
Great! A break-up all done with conversation and a hear of sheep. Clever.
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I like the dialog, punctuated by sheep and car sounds. Very inventive!
Thanks Jan
Great take on the picture, darling! As always, I love your wit.
I am slightly embarrassed to say it was based on real life events, only my father did not leave my mother at the side of the road.
That’s quite a tale. It goes from Shoo!, to poo on a Jimmy Choo. 😉 I think they’re walking, in any case though.
Those shoes were not made for walking.
That’s one way to bring an argument to an end… Nice one.
Thanks Sandra.